Wolf-Raven's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Story of Kratos]

say what?

your artistic skills top the box, but as for sound, which, you gotta admit, made or break the story, well...you have to do something with that. maybe re-edit it and make it louder. google a sound editor, and then this will deserve a 10

[Super Hero Clock]

i say...

make series

because on its own...well...it's on it's own.

[Valhalla Knights 2]

Not too bad.

Definitely deserved a 5, but there's a few things you might just want to work on. I'll go over what was good first.

Graphics were quite fantastical. you can draw anime very well. Music suited the purpose too. As for your story, a bit generic, given, but if you can twist it, it'll be fine.

Your sound, however, lacks somewhat. dialog is fine, and the Latino edge to your main rocks my socks, but if there were no subtitles, I wouldn't understand dick all. also, your timing is a little lag. maybe it was the big file speed, i dunno. but thing is, i was somewhat disinterested for a while. the fight scene was too slow for my liking, and I'm not using style for an excuse here because, bottom line, fights are fast, and they're supposed to be gripping.

for the next one, now that i see you're commit, think out your timing. also, check your sound. it's the difference between an 8 and a 10.

Good job though.

[Deciduous]

One of the better flashes i have seen.

Your story is amazing, and your original music is fantastic. people may comment by saying that it was just piano, but for this, it was quite good.

my only pet peave would be the fact that the skateboarder dies at the end. for me, it's always better if enemies are redeemed rather than killed off. that's my personal opinion, and you won't get a 0 because of it.

Fantastic job

[Redness Trailer v2]

Not a bad Trailer

Timing wasn't great, but still, not too shabby. fuck being worse than Krinkles. you, in my opinion, can pull this off with a good story line, and be BETTER than krinkles. btw, downloading that song. tis quite good.

anyway, good un.

Alpha-Nuva responds:

Timing as in what? Streaming the music? Because if that's what you meant, it could've only been off by about a few milliseconds.

Anyways, thanks for the review. The storyline, I have to admit, will be better thought out than most, but the animation for the first episode is a tiny bit sloppy in some parts. Oh, and glad you liked the song!

['Fall']

damn, that made me laugh quite a bit

for the style you have, and the way it was done. i don't think there's much to improve on. i could be a snot, and suggest a story line/no stick figures/better sounds, but it wasn't horrible, at all. actually, i gave it a 4

[PALADIN episode 5 part 1]

damn. that's one nice villian

he has control of things when he's monologuing. nice.

Anyway, your script has a few corny elements to it, but altogether not bad. your graphics are great, and your sound isn't too bad. violence is adequate but not over-the-top like you stated. it's a good show. i hope you aren't gonna leave me hanging with the second bit, eh? EH???

[Cletus the Fetus ep 16]

lol, it made me laugh

drawings were pretty fine. there was some stuff i couldn't hear, but it was good for the stuff i did hear. i loved how you moved the heads when they were talking. a nice 8 pointer

[Fire Shaman]

lol, he gets his in the end

you storyline's great. timing is a SLIGHT bit slow. your sound lagged when he was trying to start the fire. but as i said, you story line is great, and your graphics were quite good.

[The Karate Kid]

sorry sir

your timing was off. it went slowly. perhaps you were going slow-mo? if you were, I'd suggest you make some sort of sound or something to show it was going slow-mo. you used nice sound, i laughed a bit, but it didn't go in time with the music (which ended half way through) and neither did your sound. sorry, but i'll give it a 3. also, try to move away from stick figures. even though they feel no pain, they show no emotion either